You freaking did it! You promised it would be even better than Once in a Lifetime, and it almost already is in v0.2. I know I've said it many times already, but your wrinting is just on another level!! You know when to get serious, when to be funny and when to get us emotional (Alex story brought a tear to my eye) (And Chad must be Stabby Mike's son, He's everywhere lol). I'm sorry I can't become not even a follower on Patreon right now. The conversion from my currency to Euros or Dollars is a bit much for me to afford. I acctualy need to spare some money. But as I felt cheating by playing this wonderfull piece of art for free, I made a small donation. I know its not that much, but I guess anything would help, right? We are all dying to see the final v1.0 so much!! Keep the good work, pls, don't abandon this project!! I wish you all the best, Caribdis!!
With this update I now have a huge crush on Nova. She's just so badass, gosh.
Once again this was really enjoyable, and the ending of the second part got me really hyped. The atmospheres are really well done, I can't wait to see what you're planning to do with this story ! Thank you so much for sharing your work, its quality is amazing
It would be much more interesting if you use some sound of girls... You don't have to pay anyone from fiverr or something... maybe just use some sounds from porn for the sex scenes... I think everyone would love it...
I don't know/not sure if I'd like that. I have a voice in my head for each of the girls, so I think if Caribdis does not do it carefully, it would do more damage than help. It could get weird, low quality audio, not sync well, etc. And he must have other priorities now. I think the animations are super high quality enough to not require sex audio. It's just my opinion thou.
Yeah, there would be probably. Sorry if my comment sounded harsh, I didn't mean to. But if he would do that, it would be later as it would not be one of his priorities, I think. But with the option to turn it off for those who do not want it, there is no harm, right? The more options for us, the better.
i loved this game and youve already introduced me to a great song/artist (I wanna get high on you by ELWIN) so i wanted to return the favor by introducing you to "Got Me Singin' by Alex Marie Brinkley" which i think could be a great fit for like a club type scene or something in this game.
Aight, so, I am incredibly looking forward to new content for this game. The characters have already left lasting impressions on me; so much so I could barely tell they were being introduced to eventually be harem members [at least, I am guessing they will eventually be harem members]. Furthermore, somehow you found a way to create a game that I had been envisioning for a while [just with an added sexual nature]. A game that features a VR system with friends playing that are complete badasses. Having Nova possess the rifle, as well as Alex being able to shapeshift, scratches an itch not many games can because they want they protagonist to be the super cool person [does this have to do with the fact for the most part the people are cooler than me and there is finally a game that allows me to relate to the MC? Perhaps]. Put simple, this game feels like a lovechild between Persona 5 and Sword Art Online. Powerful friends from a variety of lives working together to tear down/expose the secrets of a corrupt company.
Besides that, I appreciate the reminder that this game and Once in a Lifetime take place in the same universe, with the almost name drop of the Sons of Astaroth. Again, I can not wait for the future updates to this game, as it already is one of the most memorable visual novels that I have played. Great goin Caribdis!
Edit:
And where are my manners? How could I possibly write a review of this game without mentioning the graphics? When I first saw on patreon the goal to make custom things never seen before, before I had played the game, I had my doubts on what Renpy can do further than what I have already seen. I have been so proven wrong in that assumption. The short scenes that either introduce a character or area are amazing. The general graphics are beautiful, and it feels like you are really using Renpy for what its meant for, and not just some quickly made adult game. Cant wait to see where this Calypso Box goes to next update!
I'm not one to post comments. In fact, I dug up my old account info to log in just so I could post this comment. This is hands down one of the best games I've ever played. You heard me right, not just adult games, best games period. It has a wonderful balance of action, fantasy, sci-fi, romance, comedy, sorrow, everything you could possibly want from a story. Not to mention how incredibly optimized it is and how smooth it runs even with such astonishingly detailed and beautiful artwork. This is truly a masterpiece in the making. I sincerely hope you realize how much I appreciate your work. On behalf of everyone who is lucky enough to play this, I thank you.
Most likely the best nsfw IF on itch right now. Storytelling is rich, detailed and cleverly paced. Artwork surpasses anything else I've ever seen. Worldbuilding is captivating and charming all at once.
Eternum's not just an IF, it's a whole experience. 11/10, definitely looking forward to more.
This is one of them games I was really sad to see finish, the storyline itself was interesting and the jokes where on point. i do have some questions and that's is the game done? and if so how do i play? if not then when will the full game be done
The jokes in this and OiaLT are the best parts. I almost want to just play through while failing to get laid at every point just to see how funny that makes it all. Almost, but then the other best parts don't make that possible.
Honestly, I really like it. Eternum, but the game is making a pretty common mistake in terms of content, which is an imbalance in choices. This is an important element for a Visual Novel game. For example, Nancy invites you to go to the Gym. In this situation, 100/100 players will choose "Yes" and no one will choose "No". So choosing "No" in this case makes no sense. and also think this situation is superfluous. I mean, I want every choice made to have its own merits. Every choice must make the player think carefully when choosing to be able to go in the direction they want the most. Example: If you refuse to date girl A, then girl B will like you more.
-It's soon to say this when the game is only at 0.2 but I hope Dev can fix the game content so that the game content is better, more diverse and the game is more replayable. (If this comment is confusing, please forgive me as I wrote this review using Google translate)
I don't usually comment but I just wanted to say that after playing Once in a Lifetime, it has become one of my favourite games out there. I mean I would play it even if it wasn't full of sex scenes. The story was great and the characters were all likeable. Then I downloaded Eternum and really, while playing it, I forgot what game I was playing because the story was so enjoyable. You even inspired me to make my own 3D visual novel with a great story and I've been working on it for few days.
I have some questions.
How long does it take to make like one release (0.1; 0.2 etc.) and do you know when you will be publishing 0.3?
After first playing OnaL, I can see that this is a quality developer who puts some passion into these games. I am strongly considering becoming a supporter, I can't tell you how many times I have burst out laughing from moments in these games. Can't wait to see where this story goes!
So i played Once in a lifetime a WHILE back, and have replayed it multiple times (easily top 5 VN i have played) but this is about Eternum. When Once in a life time finished and u mentioned Eternum i was hyped, and i knew if it was made by you, we would be getting one of the greatest VNs games out there. When 0.1 was released i did not play it cause my thought process was, that if i waited i would get more greatness at a time, and boi was i right. Did i regret waiting? Hell yeah i did, cause u are an amazing writer and i love this game so much. And i aint waiting again next time xD First of all, i am deeply impressed by your characters and their design. And on that note i would like to thank you for making a decently looking Mc. My only issue with Once in a life time was that Mc was pretty frikin ugly, at least until the haircut. But this Mc is decently looking so we good on that front. Now the girls. Im gonna be honest, i had doubts on how u would be able to create as good Li's as u did for Once in a life time, cause got damn you set the bar high on that one. And somehow in only 0.2 im deeply in love with all except one girl, and that girl is still decent but goddamn Caribdis, HOW? How can u create such good Li's, like goddamn. Story also awesome as heck and even more fun than Once in a life time, so keep up the good work, cant wait for the next update, and all the games u will create in the future.
Honestly the deep dive scenario you've done it masterfully. Tron vibes. . . Great work. I hope one day soon you'll be able to use your skills to craft AAA games or even better. You do possess the talent, please keep going. . . If I can and when I can, I'll try and offer my support and not just my words.
I'm sincerely impressed and that's rare for games of this genre.
I'm grateful to you for sharing your work with us for Free, especially one which is so fresh, it honestly deserves its own place in a genre like. . Cyberpunk.
You've made something delightful and it was amazing to say the least. So many elements from newer Tron, Ghost in the shell, old Bladerunner, dragon raja, the mystery set was eerie and honestly could be passed on as a stand alone.
You're awesome, last thing I'm gonna say. Good luck and God bless. I felt elated thanks to your work..
Caribdis you c*ck blocker!!! 😡😡😡I don't know whether to stay mad at you or be happy recalling this update, but the suspense at the end was like edging to the core and asking to hold back!!! But as usual, great update, and I laughed so much when Annie starts acting silly 😂😂😂and Nova was so badass man😎😎😎!!! It was totally unexpected that she has the possession of 2nd weapon, and she's that expert in welding it... I just took her for a hacker weirdo having common enmity with The Founder and Bardots... And the incident at gym was damn good 😂😂😂Kai was totally taken by surprise when he learnt that she wasn't talking about him 😂😂😂... But I still do feel that something is wrong with that mystery girl... Can't wait for next update... Please let me know the ETA for next version to become public...
Hey. I love this game!!. I have enjoyed it for several hours continuously!. In which scene within this wonderful game does that happen that you refer to in this answer?
bro you're a wonderful great person. although I'm with what chanansh say. that you should get paid for your amazing games. but I'm thankful for your kindness. i will definitely support you if i have the money but can't. until now i keep depending on my dad money to live. all i can do to thank you on this great work is public this game with my friends. many of them can support you. well just thank you for you kindness and great work!!
I commented on Once in a Lifetime about it and having played Eternum so far, I have concluded I love your sense of humor. I think you really brought it home with Eternum. After .1 and .2 I have to say, as I would to a very good friend, I hate you so much. You keep catching me with these to be continued and its killing me. Great work again and loving your characters even more than Once in a Lifetime which is saying alot.
Don't even know where to begin. I hadn't played Once in a Lifetime so I went in expecting what most adult VNs are and be all sex and little substance. I couldn't have been more wrong.
Don't get me wrong, the girls are amazing and I like that you put so much attention into their bodies and made sure they were each unique. That seems to be a second thought to most people. The characters are all so unique. While I was looking forward to, and still look forward to for some, seeing their bodies, it was their personalities that really drew me to them. They truly felt like real people I could meet. Like many others, I can't choose a favorite.
However, what blew me away the most was the story. It loosely reminds me of Ready Player One. (Yes, I noticed that's Annie's favorite movie. Nice one.) You're story telling is great. I can't even describe what I feel. The mix of comedy, drama, romance, and horror is perfectly balanced. It really leaves me wanting more. Even if the nudity and sex was removed the story would easily stand on its own.
I am anxiously awaiting the next update. Will definitely go through what is here a few more times to see how choices impact. I followed the walkthrough for this one and want to see other branches.
One question though, what version of Twinkle Twinkle Little Star did you use. It is suitably creepy sounding for something I am working on.
Just wanted to preference this that I don't cry for like sappy sad stories especially in adult or hentai vn's. The only time that has made me is LiL and in that, it's supposed to be depressing and weird. But here, fun sexy lewd times yay. That one story on Alex tho. That flashback. Literally only had to see like 10 slides to get the full picture and then I started tearing up. Good job on that. Hope for more sexy and wonderful times in this story.
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You freaking did it! You promised it would be even better than Once in a Lifetime, and it almost already is in v0.2. I know I've said it many times already, but your wrinting is just on another level!! You know when to get serious, when to be funny and when to get us emotional (Alex story brought a tear to my eye) (And Chad must be Stabby Mike's son, He's everywhere lol).
I'm sorry I can't become not even a follower on Patreon right now. The conversion from my currency to Euros or Dollars is a bit much for me to afford. I acctualy need to spare some money. But as I felt cheating by playing this wonderfull piece of art for free, I made a small donation. I know its not that much, but I guess anything would help, right? We are all dying to see the final v1.0 so much!! Keep the good work, pls, don't abandon this project!!
I wish you all the best, Caribdis!!
Any amount helps, you're very right!
Thank you Binho, it means a lot
With this update I now have a huge crush on Nova. She's just so badass, gosh.
Once again this was really enjoyable, and the ending of the second part got me really hyped. The atmospheres are really well done, I can't wait to see what you're planning to do with this story ! Thank you so much for sharing your work, its quality is amazing
Nova? Second Part?
Did I miss something?
Second part would be the second release : Eternum 0.2 (which has been out for 24 days)
Thank you very much!
Nova is easily one of the best characters ever. Just thought I needed to say that.
I'm glad you liked her!
It would be much more interesting if you use some sound of girls... You don't have to pay anyone from fiverr or something... maybe just use some sounds from porn for the sex scenes... I think everyone would love it...
It's not easy to make it right, but I'll see what I can do
I don't know/not sure if I'd like that. I have a voice in my head for each of the girls, so I think if Caribdis does not do it carefully, it would do more damage than help. It could get weird, low quality audio, not sync well, etc. And he must have other priorities now. I think the animations are super high quality enough to not require sex audio. It's just my opinion thou.
I am sure, there will be option to disable sounds :)
Yeah, there would be probably. Sorry if my comment sounded harsh, I didn't mean to. But if he would do that, it would be later as it would not be one of his priorities, I think. But with the option to turn it off for those who do not want it, there is no harm, right? The more options for us, the better.
i loved this game and youve already introduced me to a great song/artist (I wanna get high on you by ELWIN) so i wanted to return the favor by introducing you to "Got Me Singin' by Alex Marie Brinkley" which i think could be a great fit for like a club type scene or something in this game.
That was a nice one, thank you!
Hello again!!
Beware spoilers
Aight, so, I am incredibly looking forward to new content for this game. The characters have already left lasting impressions on me; so much so I could barely tell they were being introduced to eventually be harem members [at least, I am guessing they will eventually be harem members]. Furthermore, somehow you found a way to create a game that I had been envisioning for a while [just with an added sexual nature]. A game that features a VR system with friends playing that are complete badasses. Having Nova possess the rifle, as well as Alex being able to shapeshift, scratches an itch not many games can because they want they protagonist to be the super cool person [does this have to do with the fact for the most part the people are cooler than me and there is finally a game that allows me to relate to the MC? Perhaps]. Put simple, this game feels like a lovechild between Persona 5 and Sword Art Online. Powerful friends from a variety of lives working together to tear down/expose the secrets of a corrupt company.
Besides that, I appreciate the reminder that this game and Once in a Lifetime take place in the same universe, with the almost name drop of the Sons of Astaroth. Again, I can not wait for the future updates to this game, as it already is one of the most memorable visual novels that I have played. Great goin Caribdis!
Edit:
And where are my manners? How could I possibly write a review of this game without mentioning the graphics? When I first saw on patreon the goal to make custom things never seen before, before I had played the game, I had my doubts on what Renpy can do further than what I have already seen. I have been so proven wrong in that assumption. The short scenes that either introduce a character or area are amazing. The general graphics are beautiful, and it feels like you are really using Renpy for what its meant for, and not just some quickly made adult game. Cant wait to see where this Calypso Box goes to next update!
Thank you so much for your review, Trauvok 💗
I'm not one to post comments. In fact, I dug up my old account info to log in just so I could post this comment. This is hands down one of the best games I've ever played. You heard me right, not just adult games, best games period. It has a wonderful balance of action, fantasy, sci-fi, romance, comedy, sorrow, everything you could possibly want from a story. Not to mention how incredibly optimized it is and how smooth it runs even with such astonishingly detailed and beautiful artwork. This is truly a masterpiece in the making. I sincerely hope you realize how much I appreciate your work. On behalf of everyone who is lucky enough to play this, I thank you.
I appreciate it a lot, thank you <3
Most likely the best nsfw IF on itch right now. Storytelling is rich, detailed and cleverly paced. Artwork surpasses anything else I've ever seen. Worldbuilding is captivating and charming all at once.
Eternum's not just an IF, it's a whole experience. 11/10, definitely looking forward to more.
Happy to hear that! Thanks!
This is one of them games I was really sad to see finish, the storyline itself was interesting and the jokes where on point. i do have some questions and that's is the game done? and if so how do i play? if not then when will the full game be done
The game will be regularly updated every few months
this is the first nsfw game that actually made me laugh
really good game, cant wait to see next update
Happy to hear that!
Está en español?
No, sorry
This is the best game i have ever played. It has all of it: humour, tense, sadness, bit of horror and nude, I LOVE EVERY BIT OF IT. Keept it up king!
I will! Thank you Andrusa!
I didn't think you can make an even better game then, once in a lifetime but you did im actually impressed. Can't wait for a new update!
Thank you so much!
Another wonderful game like Once in a lifetime
Waiting for 1.0
Thank you!
HEY i love your game but can u do more spying in the girl locker room or spying on a girl please
someone's down bad 😂
go spy in real life if u that desperate
The jokes in this and OiaLT are the best parts. I almost want to just play through while failing to get laid at every point just to see how funny that makes it all. Almost, but then the other best parts don't make that possible.
Haha happy to hear that!
The OiaLT incel ending was great. Just saw it
-Hey, caribdis
Honestly, I really like it. Eternum, but the game is making a pretty common mistake in terms of content, which is an imbalance in choices. This is an important element for a Visual Novel game. For example, Nancy invites you to go to the Gym. In this situation, 100/100 players will choose "Yes" and no one will choose "No". So choosing "No" in this case makes no sense. and also think this situation is superfluous. I mean, I want every choice made to have its own merits. Every choice must make the player think carefully when choosing to be able to go in the direction they want the most. Example: If you refuse to date girl A, then girl B will like you more.
-It's soon to say this when the game is only at 0.2 but I hope Dev can fix the game content so that the game content is better, more diverse and the game is more replayable. (If this comment is confusing, please forgive me as I wrote this review using Google translate)
Sometimes it's hard to always do super meaningful choices, but I'll try my best. Thanks!
I don't usually comment but I just wanted to say that after playing Once in a Lifetime, it has become one of my favourite games out there. I mean I would play it even if it wasn't full of sex scenes. The story was great and the characters were all likeable. Then I downloaded Eternum and really, while playing it, I forgot what game I was playing because the story was so enjoyable. You even inspired me to make my own 3D visual novel with a great story and I've been working on it for few days.
I have some questions.
How long does it take to make like one release (0.1; 0.2 etc.) and do you know when you will be publishing 0.3?
Thank you for making these games.
It takes around 3-4 months max. I can't give an ETA yet, but check the progress bar!
After first playing OnaL, I can see that this is a quality developer who puts some passion into these games. I am strongly considering becoming a supporter, I can't tell you how many times I have burst out laughing from moments in these games. Can't wait to see where this story goes!
Thank you Devman!
So i played Once in a lifetime a WHILE back, and have replayed it multiple times (easily top 5 VN i have played) but this is about Eternum. When Once in a life time finished and u mentioned Eternum i was hyped, and i knew if it was made by you, we would be getting one of the greatest VNs games out there. When 0.1 was released i did not play it cause my thought process was, that if i waited i would get more greatness at a time, and boi was i right. Did i regret waiting? Hell yeah i did, cause u are an amazing writer and i love this game so much. And i aint waiting again next time xD First of all, i am deeply impressed by your characters and their design. And on that note i would like to thank you for making a decently looking Mc. My only issue with Once in a life time was that Mc was pretty frikin ugly, at least until the haircut. But this Mc is decently looking so we good on that front. Now the girls. Im gonna be honest, i had doubts on how u would be able to create as good Li's as u did for Once in a life time, cause got damn you set the bar high on that one. And somehow in only 0.2 im deeply in love with all except one girl, and that girl is still decent but goddamn Caribdis, HOW? How can u create such good Li's, like goddamn. Story also awesome as heck and even more fun than Once in a life time, so keep up the good work, cant wait for the next update, and all the games u will create in the future.
Luv Kalitinsa <3
Thank you so much for your comment, Kalitinsa <333
Honestly the deep dive scenario you've done it masterfully. Tron vibes. . . Great work. I hope one day soon you'll be able to use your skills to craft AAA games or even better. You do possess the talent, please keep going. . . If I can and when I can, I'll try and offer my support and not just my words.
I'm sincerely impressed and that's rare for games of this genre.
Thank you very much, Mugen
Please you're being too humble, don't thank me.
I'm grateful to you for sharing your work with us for Free, especially one which is so fresh, it honestly deserves its own place in a genre like. . Cyberpunk.
You've made something delightful and it was amazing to say the least. So many elements from newer Tron, Ghost in the shell, old Bladerunner, dragon raja, the mystery set was eerie and honestly could be passed on as a stand alone.
You're awesome, last thing I'm gonna say. Good luck and God bless. I felt elated thanks to your work..
Good luck to you too 💗
How do I unlock"Getting more comfortable"?
cant seems to find it.
Download the walkthrough and make sure you chose all the right choices!
Caribdis you c*ck blocker!!! 😡😡😡I don't know whether to stay mad at you or be happy recalling this update, but the suspense at the end was like edging to the core and asking to hold back!!! But as usual, great update, and I laughed so much when Annie starts acting silly 😂😂😂and Nova was so badass man😎😎😎!!! It was totally unexpected that she has the possession of 2nd weapon, and she's that expert in welding it... I just took her for a hacker weirdo having common enmity with The Founder and Bardots... And the incident at gym was damn good 😂😂😂Kai was totally taken by surprise when he learnt that she wasn't talking about him 😂😂😂... But I still do feel that something is wrong with that mystery girl... Can't wait for next update... Please let me know the ETA for next version to become public...
Thank you so much!
I can't give an ETA yet, but check the progress bar regularly!
HoneySelect2
???
It's HoneySelect2, I don't know what you want me to tell you
I thought you meant the images when you said "same style", sorry
Once I began to play that game,I knew this one is goin'to be a nice and funny one
(The scene,where you did the Dark Souls thing... I laughed my ass offXD 😂🤣)
I'm glad :D
Thanks for making🤗❤️
Thanks ^^
i dont know why, but i feel this would be a great anime xD
Haha maybe one day it is adapted into one 😆🙏🙏
amazing game, very excited for 0.3.
I got a question...
Allround was this Game a masterpiece btw
>///<
How do you unlock the scene "Blurred Realities"
Typing it at 2 A.M (Berlin time) rlly tired rn
Thanks in advance 👍
Go with eva
Thanks👍
"Go to explore" when you're waiting for Annie in Ion and then go with Eva
Thanks to you too 👍
Hey. I love this game!!. I have enjoyed it for several hours continuously!.
In which scene within this wonderful game does that happen that you refer to in this answer?
Greetings from Argentina!
The 1st one of the game, when you log into Eternum with Annie in Ion for the first time :)
really enjoy this game
How will I be able to load a saved game in 0.2 in 0.3?
Caribdis you should definitely open a game studio company and make tens of these.
If this is anything like other ren'py games, your saves should carry over between versions without any issues.
You are a genius!
What do you do for living? Why don't you make these kind of games for profit and become rich?
I want them to always be free, so I'm even more thankful to the people who support ^^
bro you're a wonderful great person. although I'm with what chanansh say. that you should get paid for your amazing games. but I'm thankful for your kindness. i will definitely support you if i have the money but can't. until now i keep depending on my dad money to live. all i can do to thank you on this great work is public this game with my friends. many of them can support you. well just thank you for you kindness and great work!!
Thank you Shan ^^
I commented on Once in a Lifetime about it and having played Eternum so far, I have concluded I love your sense of humor. I think you really brought it home with Eternum. After .1 and .2 I have to say, as I would to a very good friend, I hate you so much. You keep catching me with these to be continued and its killing me. Great work again and loving your characters even more than Once in a Lifetime which is saying alot.
Happy to hear that!
Hii there
I like game and i end it in minutes ago so when will "new updates" or "fully" came? Btw your work is awesome appreciate you and your team hardwork.
Check the progress bar on my Patreon to see the progress ^^
just noticed, when arriving at Lunas house the first time, there are 3 flowers just floating over the Livingroom table without a vase :)
I'll check it, thanks!
Don't even know where to begin. I hadn't played Once in a Lifetime so I went in expecting what most adult VNs are and be all sex and little substance. I couldn't have been more wrong.
Don't get me wrong, the girls are amazing and I like that you put so much attention into their bodies and made sure they were each unique. That seems to be a second thought to most people. The characters are all so unique. While I was looking forward to, and still look forward to for some, seeing their bodies, it was their personalities that really drew me to them. They truly felt like real people I could meet. Like many others, I can't choose a favorite.
However, what blew me away the most was the story. It loosely reminds me of Ready Player One. (Yes, I noticed that's Annie's favorite movie. Nice one.) You're story telling is great. I can't even describe what I feel. The mix of comedy, drama, romance, and horror is perfectly balanced. It really leaves me wanting more. Even if the nudity and sex was removed the story would easily stand on its own.
I am anxiously awaiting the next update. Will definitely go through what is here a few more times to see how choices impact. I followed the walkthrough for this one and want to see other branches.
One question though, what version of Twinkle Twinkle Little Star did you use. It is suitably creepy sounding for something I am working on.
Thank you very much DMG! I found the song on YT, I think it's the dead space one
I came for the lewd but I stayed for the story
Its back, Ive been waiting for this update for so long, Ive had this on my phone since the release. Great job !
Thanks!
Alex reminds me of a girl in highschool where doing pep rallys we had fun
Just wanted to preference this that I don't cry for like sappy sad stories especially in adult or hentai vn's. The only time that has made me is LiL and in that, it's supposed to be depressing and weird. But here, fun sexy lewd times yay. That one story on Alex tho. That flashback. Literally only had to see like 10 slides to get the full picture and then I started tearing up. Good job on that. Hope for more sexy and wonderful times in this story.
Thank you very much, PT <3