Caribdis!!! You are King(or Queen) of VNs!!! Please, I'm BEGGING you to give (no spoilers intended) the girl a praise kink to go with her head pats need!
Caribdis I know I've been hanging out in the comments for a while now giving tutorials and just commenting on how good the game is and I love it.
So imma get to my full review on 0.6 spoilers ahead so don't read it if you don't wanna be spoiled.
The first scenes on the military base is amazing the atomic heart reference and Annie being cute and Penelope just having those Gyattts I just loved it and I was so hyped when I saw the mc just run towards the general and stole his gem it was so badass like sheesh
And I notice changes like character design and overall change on looks on our mc and bruh was I surprised when I saw Eva again hahaha you gotta love Eva right? And the girls being jealous is funny af, there's also the dalia where I was so tempted onto penetration but I didn't cuz well imma follow the harem route but mark my words I will finish all the girls one by one and rejecting them all at the end to find your secret ending just like in OIAL
Well this was supposed to be a review but it didn't turn out to be one anyway just keep up the good work and stay healthy Caribdis.
Sorry, I just finished the 0.6 version and....daymn....that is ffing top. I am totally out again about which AVN I like best....this is in my top 3... Can't wait to see what is next.
Desert Stalker for sure...other is a bit tricky..switching all the time..but I think Eternum fits on second..or shared first. Oh yes, Projekt: Passion.
Caribdis my man you can't keep blue-balling us with these cliffhangers every single time😭😭
But in all seriousness tho, you've outdone yourself this time as well, and Idk how but you keep improving both as an author and a game designer and you genuinely deserve a big name for such an amazing piece of art.
Just want to point out that you're doing a fantastic job with picking the right soundtrack to special situations... like Lunas' at Warthogs or Alexs' while watching the stars.
Damn... cant remember the last time my eyes getting wet because of a "game".
Amazing game, been playing since 0.3 and this newest update was fire!! Def gonna do a replay once its fully completed to do an only alex run and then prob an only Luna one, love all of them but unlike other games this just seems like the type where I don't actually want a harem ending. Keep up the good work!
I left a review before in the 0.5 but I feel the need to do it again. Easily the only VN where I ACTUALLY cared more about the story being told than the lewd content, but speaking of the lewd content. The last scene in 0.6 is something I was not prepaired for, and man is Alex one of my favorite characters. The writing in this story is phenomenal, the dialog is realistic and sets every character apart from one another. The only thing I can really say is you've done it again Caribdis. 10/10!!! I hope there's more Luna content to come as she is best girl imo, but I can't wait for 0.7!!
It was a very, very perfect game, it was like reliving a different life, it brought me a different feeling, I will probably never forget it, everyone has a different personality, it made me like each character, the characters in it are also very beautiful, I really like it, especially Nancy, she is really beautiful, the game is really great
Cant find the scenes below no matter how I play the story. What did I miss and where? "Shower Show" "Blurred Realities" "Daring Challenge" "Royal Protocol"
The Shower Show is when Dalia went inside of the bathroom while you’re cleaning, choose to stay in the bathtub.
Blurred Realities is when you accept the offer in Ion. (the hooker club thing during your first time playing with Annie. Don’t worry about your money because Eva will give you the money back.)
i forgot what Daring Challenge is, but Im guessing its for Dalia? To get that, you need to choose follow her right after she ranaway during the sparring match againt the glasses guy on the gym.
If not for Dalia, then probably Nova? for Noval, during the costume party you need to find Penny first, she’ll gt splashed with water and the she will go out to change. After that scene go find Nova. Do the Drinking challenge but choose to “Stop it there” or something, dont continue drinking because you will lose. If you stop drinking you’ll proceed to the 2nd round where you need Penny’s Bra, go find the locker room and talk to Penny, then go back to Nova.
Royal Protocol is during your time with Calypso in the Saloon bathroom when she got sprayed with blood. You need to continue Teasing her.
Once in a life time was my first visual novel, this was my second. i think i chose the two best visual novels to start with. you have set the bar so high for visual novels.
For EroGe Visual Novels, he did. I’ve never played a lewd Visual Novel that has this enjoyable story. You know, the “came for the lewds, stayed for the story” thing. Every lewd visual novel that I played felt pretty bland and boring after I played OIALT.
Just finished the game and things are starting to get interesting. I thought the change on the MC’s physique is because you just want to revamp him a bit, until Chang mentioned that he looked bigger and stuff. I guess that change is part of the story. Also I love the Alex scene at the end, I hope you make something that great with Dalia, Nova and Nancy soon!
0.6 was absolutely amazing, and the ending both the final alex scene and the real cliff hanger, suburb, another 10/10, cant wait for 0.7 you just somehow seem to keep getting better and better and continue to set absolutely high standards, thank you for all the work 20/10
I've played 0.6 for a bit, but when starting the game up now, I get this error:
Thu Aug 24 21:42:22 2023 Alternative_Saves_Android_Port Ren'Py 7.6.1.23060707 Bootstrap to the start of init.init. took 0.00s Bootstrap to the start of init.init. took 0.00s Manufacturer samsung Model SM-M526BR Android Version: 13 Device Arch: android-arm64_v8a Screen diagonal is 5.92456835593 inches. Version: Ren'Py 7.6.1.23060707 Early init. took 0.07s Early init. took 0.07s Failed to sync your saves to/from stock ANDROID_PUBLIC Android search paths: /storage/emulated/0/Android/data/com.caribdis.eternum/files/../../../../Documents/Ixalon/com.caribdis.eternum/game /data/user/0/com.caribdis.eternum/files/game Full traceback: File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 275, in bootstrap File "renpy/main.py", line 566, in main OSError: [Errno 13] Permission denied: '/storage/emulated/0/Android/data/com.caribdis.eternum/files/../../../../Documents/Ixalon/com.caribdis.eternum/game' Before loading the script. OSError: [Errno 13] Permission denied: '/storage/emulated/0/Android/data/com.caribdis.eternum/files/../../../../Documents/Ixalon/com.caribdis.eternum/game'
Your game is the best, and I'm so glad to discover your game. Eternum is a masterpiece, I just want to know that if calypso will be included in his harem in the future. Because, she's so hot and how she belittle me damn.
Hey! Too broke for Patreon Discord access rn so I just wanted to leave a comment to express how much I love your game! Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds in the future updates! Keep at it!
(SPOILER) Hey, so i had to restart my progress and im having this issue where after you ask dalia for her password to her private server, her profile goes gray and idk what to do since theres no choice and idk what i did wrong. Pls help
Damn Caribdis. When I would meet you on the street i would pay you at least one bar full of bear, or whatever you prefer. It is insane how much love and detail is in this game. I waited long for 0.6 but it was WORTH it. I can't wait for 0.7 and even more for the finished game.
I still have full respect for everything you doing in this game and would like to announce the best 18+ Itch.io game i know. And I played a lot.
Thanks for that, it was much fun and I really liked the things added!
I donated twice with PayPal. PayPal has now banned me forever. Apparently terms of service forbids purchase of alcohol, tobacco, firearms, annuities, and pornography amongst a slew of other legal items.
My personal opinion is that paypay can rot in hell but you might consider another option when donating.
Hey there Caribdis! I have downloaded the android Full Res Version and I can't seem to load my saves from 0.5 and it says "Can't find a place to stop rolling back. Perhaps the script changed in an incompatible way?". If this is the case does that mean I have to start the game over again?
You need to run the game first. After you get a blackscreen on the loading screen, close the game. Go to the folder that you extracted and you’ll see a .rpa file there. Move that file to the game’s file which is located in documents/Ixion. Make sure to paste it on the game folder.
Potential spoilers (?) but more of just theory crafting after finishing 0.6 (Need to do my usual full game playthrough with the new update).
First off, based on the recency of updates, I'm willing to bet that we're looking at a December/January release for 0.7, which for once with these kinds of things, I'm okay with. This is worth the wait.
Now on to the theories (theory?) of how things are gonna play out.
So we all know there are the seven main girls, plus Calypso, yes, but for now I'm focusing on the seven we get profiles of. Obviously, endgame is to have a full happy harem that accepts each other and MC fully, as well as s** scenes for all of them all the way. With the number of times the MC and the girls have mentioned potential threesomes and beyond (Which I think is a similar thing that's happening to all of them with the physical changes or the water butterflys, Kredon ain't normal), Caribdis has for sure set us up for multi-girl scenes, which constitutes having slept with each one already (Or at least, the ones involved).
So far, we've obviously slept with Nancy and Alex, and Cari has set us up for Nova in 0.7 (if that One Piece sleepover ain't it, I'll eat my hat), potentially Annie and Dahlia not too far behind (Annie's whisper that next time is it and Dahlia's acceptance that she wants you to be the one in the shack). The stragglers are Penny and Luna, Luna even more than Penny, I'd say. Overall, mathwise, we're going to have to start sleeping with multiple girls per update (assuming the full game is 1.0. Honestly, most games I'd be upset with the idea of 1.0 not being full release, but Caribdis, if you want to take this all the way to 2.0, I'm here for a good time, and a long time if needed).
This all leads me to believe that 0.7 is going to have the opening resolution of the cliffhanger as Cari is want to do at this point, I could see Alex being taken away or something as part of this because her dad is... not good. We're either going to have one of the bases of El Coyote being raided (I'm going to guess we're taking Annie with us to Ion along with another girl and then I could see Luna and another girl, leaning Nova in my head, for our New World escapade, or else some of the girls and us go to one and the rest of the girls go to the other?) or else this "hunt" that has now been mentioned twice (Which I'm personally thinking won't happen until 0.8 and is going to lead into Dahlia's full scene).
Reason for one or the other is that the base raids are going to get us a third gem of doom and I think the hunt will be what wins us the fourth. Eventually we will need to face Thanatos and either defeat him or convince him to join us, which I could see at this point. Obviously we'll have Nova's scene with the One Piece watch party (Still confused how they're watching the last episode, but ah well), I could just be fantasizing (I don't exactly recall how we left off with Penny, need to play through again to remember) but I could also see a side scene/date with Penny to the feudal japanese world.
Biggest thing I think is that we need to further our Luna connection this next update. We have all of one scene and whilst they're all great, it's (personally) one of the more forgettable ones.
Less of theory now and more just me being wistful, but based on Caribdis' growth (viewed by OIAL and now Eternum) I'm keeping my fingers crossed that we do get a polyamory confession scene or something? Like at some point there is very much a sit down between MC and all seven girls wherein he confesses he's seeing each of them (I can't get Nancy's reaction of "Oh, that's all you wanted to talk about? I thought it was serious." or something out of my head) and there's of course the anger then the realization that a lot of the girls like each other as well (beyond just friends. If they don't admit it, we all know they're lying). OIAL, whilst the ending slideshow is amazing, kind of just glances over it. Obviously some of the girls find out about each other and make a believable web of ones in-the-know and have different reactions, there's no full resolution or talk about it, it's just "Haha, and they all lived happily ever after, accepting each other with no issue or thought" kind of.
It would (again, personally) round out the whole "chosen family" that's occurred. All the girls have gotten closer due to MC and Cari has done a wonderful job of making sure those connections remain and grow themselves (ie Luna and Penny hanging at the mall, Penny and Nova being best buds in college, etc). Also, Nancy has apparently already accepted all of them as both MC's girlfriends as well as her own children to mother (Which I guess makes sense, Alex doesn't exactly have a loving family outside of maybe an Axel twist based on 0.6, she's already Penny and Dahlia's mom, she's acting as Annie's caretaker in Kredon, Luna lost her mom early on, leaving only Nova who, let's face it, is chaos).
To any who read this far, thank you for reading my ramble, feel free to reply with your thoughts if you too are spinning wild theories in your head along these lines?
Caribdis, if you read this (far), keep it up, I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter, but still wish you to take the time you need to continue this masterpiece you've ensorcelled us with.
EDIT: Wow, I was tired and spelled Caribdis wrong every time.
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Caribdis!!! You are King(or Queen) of VNs!!! Please, I'm BEGGING you to give (no spoilers intended) the girl a praise kink to go with her head pats need!
Caribdis I know I've been hanging out in the comments for a while now giving tutorials and just commenting on how good the game is and I love it.
So imma get to my full review on 0.6 spoilers ahead so don't read it if you don't wanna be spoiled.
The first scenes on the military base is amazing the atomic heart reference and Annie being cute and Penelope just having those Gyattts I just loved it and I was so hyped when I saw the mc just run towards the general and stole his gem it was so badass like sheesh
And I notice changes like character design and overall change on looks on our mc and bruh was I surprised when I saw Eva again hahaha you gotta love Eva right? And the girls being jealous is funny af, there's also the dalia where I was so tempted onto penetration but I didn't cuz well imma follow the harem route but mark my words I will finish all the girls one by one and rejecting them all at the end to find your secret ending just like in OIAL
Well this was supposed to be a review but it didn't turn out to be one anyway just keep up the good work and stay healthy Caribdis.
Thank you Zaienn!
My Glorious King Caribdis has done it again!
i hecking love eva
eva is the best
holy shit, the reviews in the comments are all good. im bouta download it. yall better not let me down
So, how was the ride?
GOD the comments are an understatment. this is actually good, comedy is peak and it has a solid plot
Bro, I went nuts after reading Vader reference. Love it
Sorry, I just finished the 0.6 version and....daymn....that is ffing top. I am totally out again about which AVN I like best....this is in my top 3... Can't wait to see what is next.
Y bro top 3 is there anything else in 1st 2nd?
Desert Stalker for sure...other is a bit tricky..switching all the time..but I think Eternum fits on second..or shared first. Oh yes, Projekt: Passion.
Caribdis my man you can't keep blue-balling us with these cliffhangers every single time😭😭
But in all seriousness tho, you've outdone yourself this time as well, and Idk how but you keep improving both as an author and a game designer and you genuinely deserve a big name for such an amazing piece of art.
Thank you so much :D
the repeaters >>> the girls
If am being honest I think Micaela can easily beat Thanatos if she have a neural implant xd
That's hilarious 😂😂
Thanatos is scary af. And he have the weapon of Atlas. I wanted that sword so badly. (Hyans or something I forgot the name)
Keeping it simple:
I love your game.
Just want to point out that you're doing a fantastic job with picking the right soundtrack to special situations... like Lunas' at Warthogs or Alexs' while watching the stars.
Damn... cant remember the last time my eyes getting wet because of a "game".
Thank you...
Thank you for playing!
Great work on 0.6, can't wait for 0.7, the story just keeps getting spicier and better I love it!!
Are we going to see more calypso scenes in the future? I really hope so because I enjoyed that this update.
Yes we will
Yay
Author needs to learn how to use 7zp and his ultra pack.
The size of the game has already grown a lot.
Amazing game, been playing since 0.3 and this newest update was fire!! Def gonna do a replay once its fully completed to do an only alex run and then prob an only Luna one, love all of them but unlike other games this just seems like the type where I don't actually want a harem ending. Keep up the good work!
Thanks!
I left a review before in the 0.5 but I feel the need to do it again. Easily the only VN where I ACTUALLY cared more about the story being told than the lewd content, but speaking of the lewd content. The last scene in 0.6 is something I was not prepaired for, and man is Alex one of my favorite characters. The writing in this story is phenomenal, the dialog is realistic and sets every character apart from one another. The only thing I can really say is you've done it again Caribdis. 10/10!!! I hope there's more Luna content to come as she is best girl imo, but I can't wait for 0.7!!
TYVM!
It was a very, very perfect game, it was like reliving a different life, it brought me a different feeling, I will probably never forget it, everyone has a different personality, it made me like each character, the characters in it are also very beautiful, I really like it, especially Nancy, she is really beautiful, the game is really great
Thank you so much!
this game was the best experience Thank you for making it happen
Cant find the scenes below no matter how I play the story. What did I miss and where? "Shower Show" "Blurred Realities" "Daring Challenge" "Royal Protocol"
The Shower Show is when Dalia went inside of the bathroom while you’re cleaning, choose to stay in the bathtub.
Blurred Realities is when you accept the offer in Ion. (the hooker club thing during your first time playing with Annie. Don’t worry about your money because Eva will give you the money back.)
i forgot what Daring Challenge is, but Im guessing its for Dalia? To get that, you need to choose follow her right after she ranaway during the sparring match againt the glasses guy on the gym.
If not for Dalia, then probably Nova? for Noval, during the costume party you need to find Penny first, she’ll gt splashed with water and the she will go out to change. After that scene go find Nova. Do the Drinking challenge but choose to “Stop it there” or something, dont continue drinking because you will lose. If you stop drinking you’ll proceed to the 2nd round where you need Penny’s Bra, go find the locker room and talk to Penny, then go back to Nova.
是的，nova
Daring Challenge is the scene where you and nova complete Akira's last challenge
I'm sure it's a false positive, but the 0.6 update is being flagged as malware on my android devices.
Mine too... I played the game for hours by the next day it wont load always crashing im playing in Android
Once in a life time was my first visual novel, this was my second. i think i chose the two best visual novels to start with. you have set the bar so high for visual novels.
Im gonna play it again 😏
For EroGe Visual Novels, he did. I’ve never played a lewd Visual Novel that has this enjoyable story. You know, the “came for the lewds, stayed for the story” thing. Every lewd visual novel that I played felt pretty bland and boring after I played OIALT.
Goat game goat developer
omfg nova has a pochita i'm in love
0.7 Eva arc true real
0.6 was amazing! Man, you literally set the standard for visual novels at this point. Your work is amazing. Also the last scene was HOT AF.
Just finished the game and things are starting to get interesting. I thought the change on the MC’s physique is because you just want to revamp him a bit, until Chang mentioned that he looked bigger and stuff. I guess that change is part of the story. Also I love the Alex scene at the end, I hope you make something that great with Dalia, Nova and Nancy soon!
I switched from Android to IOS, now how am I gonna play em, help me out guys😭😭
If Joiplay is available on IOS then that might be your only way of playing. Download joiplay and the windows version of the game
0.6 was absolutely amazing, and the ending both the final alex scene and the real cliff hanger, suburb, another 10/10, cant wait for 0.7 you just somehow seem to keep getting better and better and continue to set absolutely high standards, thank you for all the work 20/10
Thank you so much!
The ending of 0.6 was so fire
I've played 0.6 for a bit, but when starting the game up now, I get this error:
Been waiting on this for months 😭😭😭 i love your games bro 😭🙏
Your game is the best, and I'm so glad to discover your game. Eternum is a masterpiece, I just want to know that if calypso will be included in his harem in the future. Because, she's so hot and how she belittle me damn.
She's be part of it
Oh, thanks for the answer can't wait
i have to say that i really love the latest update it seemed really long and i loved every minute of it.
Hey! Too broke for Patreon Discord access rn so I just wanted to leave a comment to express how much I love your game! Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds in the future updates! Keep at it!
P.S. I choose tails btw ;)
Yeee fellow tails gang. I wonder if we get to do something with her in the future ;)
(SPOILER) Hey, so i had to restart my progress and im having this issue where after you ask dalia for her password to her private server, her profile goes gray and idk what to do since theres no choice and idk what i did wrong. Pls help
follow the walkthrough. It is very likely that you made the wrong choice somewhere
Just finished 0.6
Damn Caribdis. When I would meet you on the street i would pay you at least one bar full of bear, or whatever you prefer.
It is insane how much love and detail is in this game. I waited long for 0.6 but it was WORTH it. I can't wait for 0.7 and even more for the finished game.
I still have full respect for everything you doing in this game and would like to announce the best 18+ Itch.io game i know. And I played a lot.
Thanks for that, it was much fun and I really liked the things added!
Thank you so much :D
Naaaa.. thank you!
I love what you made possible with Alex btw.
Thanks. And please never leave this game unfinished.
I donated twice with PayPal. PayPal has now banned me forever. Apparently terms of service forbids purchase of alcohol, tobacco, firearms, annuities, and pornography amongst a slew of other legal items.
My personal opinion is that paypay can rot in hell but you might consider another option when donating.
Wow that's... something
But thank you so much for donating in any case! :)
same. looking for desicion, no luck till now
I can't seem to get it to run properly either. I hit ignore on the fault screen now images aren't loading.
U have to move rpa file into document, u can read the instructions in your downloaded zip folder
Did that. I had to create the folder. Oh... Copy... Hmm also wrong folder. Anyway, yup... Fixed it! Thanks!
Hey, got the same issue and I don’t understand how to fix it. Can’t seem to create the new folder. Please how did you actually do it?
You need to run the game first. After you get a blackscreen on the loading screen, close the game. Go to the folder that you extracted and you’ll see a .rpa file there. Move that file to the game’s file which is located in documents/Ixion. Make sure to paste it on the game folder.
Potential spoilers (?) but more of just theory crafting after finishing 0.6 (Need to do my usual full game playthrough with the new update).
First off, based on the recency of updates, I'm willing to bet that we're looking at a December/January release for 0.7, which for once with these kinds of things, I'm okay with. This is worth the wait.
Now on to the theories (theory?) of how things are gonna play out.
So we all know there are the seven main girls, plus Calypso, yes, but for now I'm focusing on the seven we get profiles of. Obviously, endgame is to have a full happy harem that accepts each other and MC fully, as well as s** scenes for all of them all the way. With the number of times the MC and the girls have mentioned potential threesomes and beyond (Which I think is a similar thing that's happening to all of them with the physical changes or the water butterflys, Kredon ain't normal), Caribdis has for sure set us up for multi-girl scenes, which constitutes having slept with each one already (Or at least, the ones involved).
So far, we've obviously slept with Nancy and Alex, and Cari has set us up for Nova in 0.7 (if that One Piece sleepover ain't it, I'll eat my hat), potentially Annie and Dahlia not too far behind (Annie's whisper that next time is it and Dahlia's acceptance that she wants you to be the one in the shack). The stragglers are Penny and Luna, Luna even more than Penny, I'd say. Overall, mathwise, we're going to have to start sleeping with multiple girls per update (assuming the full game is 1.0. Honestly, most games I'd be upset with the idea of 1.0 not being full release, but Caribdis, if you want to take this all the way to 2.0, I'm here for a good time, and a long time if needed).
This all leads me to believe that 0.7 is going to have the opening resolution of the cliffhanger as Cari is want to do at this point, I could see Alex being taken away or something as part of this because her dad is... not good. We're either going to have one of the bases of El Coyote being raided (I'm going to guess we're taking Annie with us to Ion along with another girl and then I could see Luna and another girl, leaning Nova in my head, for our New World escapade, or else some of the girls and us go to one and the rest of the girls go to the other?) or else this "hunt" that has now been mentioned twice (Which I'm personally thinking won't happen until 0.8 and is going to lead into Dahlia's full scene).
Reason for one or the other is that the base raids are going to get us a third gem of doom and I think the hunt will be what wins us the fourth. Eventually we will need to face Thanatos and either defeat him or convince him to join us, which I could see at this point.
Obviously we'll have Nova's scene with the One Piece watch party (Still confused how they're watching the last episode, but ah well), I could just be fantasizing (I don't exactly recall how we left off with Penny, need to play through again to remember) but I could also see a side scene/date with Penny to the feudal japanese world.
Biggest thing I think is that we need to further our Luna connection this next update. We have all of one scene and whilst they're all great, it's (personally) one of the more forgettable ones.
Less of theory now and more just me being wistful, but based on Caribdis' growth (viewed by OIAL and now Eternum) I'm keeping my fingers crossed that we do get a polyamory confession scene or something? Like at some point there is very much a sit down between MC and all seven girls wherein he confesses he's seeing each of them (I can't get Nancy's reaction of "Oh, that's all you wanted to talk about? I thought it was serious." or something out of my head) and there's of course the anger then the realization that a lot of the girls like each other as well (beyond just friends. If they don't admit it, we all know they're lying). OIAL, whilst the ending slideshow is amazing, kind of just glances over it. Obviously some of the girls find out about each other and make a believable web of ones in-the-know and have different reactions, there's no full resolution or talk about it, it's just "Haha, and they all lived happily ever after, accepting each other with no issue or thought" kind of.
It would (again, personally) round out the whole "chosen family" that's occurred. All the girls have gotten closer due to MC and Cari has done a wonderful job of making sure those connections remain and grow themselves (ie Luna and Penny hanging at the mall, Penny and Nova being best buds in college, etc). Also, Nancy has apparently already accepted all of them as both MC's girlfriends as well as her own children to mother (Which I guess makes sense, Alex doesn't exactly have a loving family outside of maybe an Axel twist based on 0.6, she's already Penny and Dahlia's mom, she's acting as Annie's caretaker in Kredon, Luna lost her mom early on, leaving only Nova who, let's face it, is chaos).
To any who read this far, thank you for reading my ramble, feel free to reply with your thoughts if you too are spinning wild theories in your head along these lines?
Caribdis, if you read this (far), keep it up, I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter, but still wish you to take the time you need to continue this masterpiece you've ensorcelled us with.
EDIT: Wow, I was tired and spelled Caribdis wrong every time.
Thank you Zephyr, I will!