Genuinely enjoyed the game so far, really memorable and likable characters plus great storytelling that doesn't bore me. Just the right amount of comedy and action.
*chef's kiss* absolutley perfect best game ive played for a long time also the childhood scene's music brought a tear to my eye. Keep up the good work.
Another magnificent story where the sex does not detract from the plot.
I don't want to put in spoilers, but...
It has the feel of Ready Player One crossed with The Matrix, and that is fantastic.
I thoroughly enjoyed the narrative, and was pleased that the sex scenes were (almost) all unforced. They flowed naturally with the story line, and made sense per character.
Thank you for making such a wonderful game, it is clearly a labor of love (double entendre intended).
Alright, I have to hand it to you, you also have a hell of an ear for the music. The music just fits, perfectly for each part of the story. I can only imagine how many songs you have had to listen to to find just that right one.
Not only that, I am floored at the way that you write compelling story and dialog. The characters are growing organically, with no sudden jumps or monumental leaps into a change of personality. Everything stems from how they are interacting with each other and the world itself.
This is a game where I could see myself playing, even if you dropped the “A” from “AVN”.
I am usually an impatient person, wanting more and more, faster and faster. I know that there are many (MANY) just like that, wanting you to work faster, and release more frequently.
My advice is to ignore that pressure. Keep doing what you are doing, because it’s working. I would take waiting several months for another wonderful chapter over a rushed job that degrades the quality of the game. Don’t compromise your artistic integrity just for a quick turnaround.
Thank you (and your other contributors) for a wonderful chapter…yet again.
I wish I could pop into Patreon and sub at Demon Lord, but I am positive my wife would kill me :D.
If you need any coding help (and it isn’t immediately urgent, I’m not always looking there), hit me up on f95zone (same name). I may be new to Ren’Py (and am not that fond of python in general), but I love to talk shop, and would be happy to chat software dev.
FYI, you are making it damn impossible to choose my favorite character. Every chapter seems to change my mind and want to pick a different favorite. At the moment it is sitting between Nova and Luna, with Nova having the slight edge.
An amzaing visual novel with impressive script and outstanding model.Every charactor is vivid through the gripping plots.The most important thing is,the game has a chinese language support which is rare in this kind of games.Thx for bringing us such a marvelous game!Cant wait to see more updates in future.
By the way it is really a pity that this game cant launch on steam for both the artist and VALVE.
Made an account just to tell you how great your game is! Story and character development is really well made! Love it, it really hooks you up. It reminds me of one of the litRPG novels, like Way of the Shaman or Disgardium, I wonder if you took inspiration from those! Anyways awesome job! keep it up!
I'm just getting to the part with the dark hallway, and just gotta say: fucking SAME. Whenever Alex Kister uploads a new video for the Mandela Catalogue, something about the dark just seems way more unsettling than before lmfao
Caribdis You are a Genius man! I never play a visual novel like this. The history, characters and dialogues are perfect. I only crate an account to leave a comment 👍
The catagory of this game aside. this is THE BEST virtual novel type game I have ever played. An EXTREMELY solid 10/10 no doubt. You should really consider putting this game on steam.
You really should consider putting this beauty on Steam, especially with itch changing their payment options (or so I hear)
There are a TON of games on Steam which look like *expletive deleted*, and are only a fraction into as much development as Eternum... and another reason: I can buy Steam cards, so I don't need a credit card or paypal or whatever... I'd buy in a heartbeat... and maybe add the content for patreon in a DLC or something?
I've been checking back ever so often. I finally made an account to comment.
This is the best Virtual Novel I've played and seen. I'm a girl and I love it. Nova, Alex, and Luna are my favorite. I wish it had voice acting tbh. It'd be cool lol. Maybe in a future game.
Caribdis I just wanted to know when the next update will be. I hate cliff hangers and waiting for stuff, but this has gotten my interest so much. It's so well written! Do you write it yourself or do you have a team to help? I'm new to this site and I found you from a Youtuber that I randomly came accross, otherwise I wouldn't have known about this masterpiece. Also, I absolutely love that you comment on like everyone who comments on this, it's really nice to know that you're active in the community. :D
I had to create an account just to comment, I was tired of not being able to!
hey caribdis, u said there would be 4 scenes in the next update, im sure that includes dalia and alex... ive narrowed the next 2 scenes down to 3 people: penelope, nova, and annie. with a small chance that calypso gets something but i dont think she'll get any scenes for the entire game. im hoping that penelope gets a scene (i doubt it) but can u give me a hint :)? lol
edit: i guess it could actually be a side character. if it is, then its probably dalia, alex, annie, and a side character. i am really hoping penelope gets something tho :(
I dont know if im allowed to post this here, but i got banned from the Caribdis discord server and i have no way of contacting a moderator. It said i got banned for a *unspecified reason*.
I have finished the game, but I can't unlock the last outfit for annie. I have tried to reinstall the game but it's still the same problem. Anyone here have any thoughts on how to fix this?
Yes. I tell her I like her and then I give her a kiss. After that, nothing happened. I have finished the game entirely and even try to play it over and over again but nothing happened.
Dear author, I have just solved the problem of overseas payment, and I am very happy to be your supporter. You have worked hard for the birth of 0.6. Thank you very much for your efforts. I am also looking forward to playing 0.6.
You have to restart the playthrough. You probably messed up the same I did and complimented her hair or looks when you first meet her. Once you do that it's pretty much over for her route. You have to compliment her pen.
There's a text walkthrough available as an optional download that will guide you through the choices correctly if you want. It's obviously full of spoilers, so be warned
Extremely good. My only suggestion would be to maybe remove a specific character from the Eternum's VIP party scene. It kinda tipped the hat into the direction of game's overarching plot maybe sooner than you wanted it. Can't wait for the next update!
The game is just too good. But I want to ask that, in the future, the game will have updates, as it stil hasn't been completed right? So, how can I add the new features in the downloaded files?, I suppose that I will not need to redownload all over again whenever there's a new update?
Hmm I see, thanks man 🙏 . But have you ever thought about the idea of creating update patches for each update, so that players wouldn't have to redownload for several times?
Hi! I've started playing Eternum, and I'm extremely impressed so far. As promised, I'll report typos I find in here, but honestly it took me forever to even come across the first one! Great job, there.
The one I found was the following line from Millie, where "its" should be "it's" with an apostrophe:
"There's a car in the parking lot that started smoking! It looks like its coming from the engine!"
hey, have you thought about putting this and once in a lifetime on steam? Other great vn's like being a dik and leap of faith are on their, and your in the big 3 of AVN's in my opinion! I replay this game every few months i just love what you have created!
Hello, where can I solve a problem that I have when trying to play since I played version 0.4 a long time ago and I loved it. And now I updated it and it won't let me play it, the game just freezes and then the computer freezes, if you could help me solve this problem I would really appreciate it since the game is perfect and I would like to see how it ends
Dear author, are you only active here? I saw that your twitter has not been updated for two months. Can I get your reply in patreon? Although I don’t want to disturb your creation, I can get you I will be very excited for your reply, my current economy can only be your supporter, but my salary will increase in a few months, and I hope I can support you more, because I really like this game, this It's the first time I want to sponsor an author
Real talk man, author to author here, (dare I call myself an author after experiencing this profoundly stunning WIP?!?! Or merely a peon who writes for fun?!) The way you set everything up is just perfect, the pacing, the dialogue, and the character reactions are just so on point. I cannot help but be in awe at your work. Originally I thought this was going to be some normal sex game, but after playing through it... My god... I cannot describe just how great it is, and sure people will complain about the mechanic of 'develop relations or say some funny one liner', but you have to hand it to Carabdis that they've made a masterpiece. And it isn't even finished yet! You have my respect, good sir, from one author to another.
(And you'll have my wages once I score a full time job, whether you like it or not! Because we need more of this, and God knows that if you ever stopped development because of insufficient funds then we'd all weep and a great abyss would open up across the Earth; denoting that a talented individual such as you was held back by the constraints of society and money!)
Enough dick sucking from me... Time to go and see what all the fuss is with OIAL.
i come back and forth here to see if there are any news about 0.6, and i always read some comments and i heard you talking about discord, i wanted to join the server before but i heard it got raided and you deleted it or something? but i saw there is a new discord is it only for subsribers and people who support you on patreon?
The server is the same, you can still join and check the announcements as always, just the chatting and some channels are restricted to patrons rn to avoid more raids
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Genuinely enjoyed the game so far, really memorable and likable characters plus great storytelling that doesn't bore me. Just the right amount of comedy and action.
TYVM!
*chef's kiss* absolutley perfect best game ive played for a long time also the childhood scene's music brought a tear to my eye. Keep up the good work.
Thanks!
Another magnificent story where the sex does not detract from the plot.
I don't want to put in spoilers, but...
It has the feel of Ready Player One crossed with The Matrix, and that is fantastic.I thoroughly enjoyed the narrative, and was pleased that the sex scenes were (almost) all unforced. They flowed naturally with the story line, and made sense per character.
Thank you for making such a wonderful game, it is clearly a labor of love (double entendre intended).
I look forward to the next chapters!
Glad you liked it!
Alright, I have to hand it to you, you also have a hell of an ear for the music. The music just fits, perfectly for each part of the story. I can only imagine how many songs you have had to listen to to find just that right one.
Not only that, I am floored at the way that you write compelling story and dialog. The characters are growing organically, with no sudden jumps or monumental leaps into a change of personality. Everything stems from how they are interacting with each other and the world itself.
This is a game where I could see myself playing, even if you dropped the “A” from “AVN”.
I am usually an impatient person, wanting more and more, faster and faster. I know that there are many (MANY) just like that, wanting you to work faster, and release more frequently.
My advice is to ignore that pressure. Keep doing what you are doing, because it’s working. I would take waiting several months for another wonderful chapter over a rushed job that degrades the quality of the game. Don’t compromise your artistic integrity just for a quick turnaround.
Thank you (and your other contributors) for a wonderful chapter…yet again.
I wish I could pop into Patreon and sub at Demon Lord, but I am positive my wife would kill me :D.
If you need any coding help (and it isn’t immediately urgent, I’m not always looking there), hit me up on f95zone (same name). I may be new to Ren’Py (and am not that fond of python in general), but I love to talk shop, and would be happy to chat software dev.
FYI, you are making it damn impossible to choose my favorite character. Every chapter seems to change my mind and want to pick a different favorite. At the moment it is sitting between Nova and Luna, with Nova having the slight edge.
Thank you so much!
My first visual novel, probably one of the best games i've seen in term of story, I NEED 0.6!!!! lol
Thanks!
what is the code to the safe
i got the numbers 3, 18 and 2
but they dont work
its the safe with annie and luna trying to break the curse
You got the numbers right but the order is 3218
This game is a damn drug to me. I NEEEEEED ITTTTT!
Don't know how you do it, but you take the expected standard of Visual novels to the next level.
Fucking revolutionary
Thank you so much!
An amzaing visual novel with impressive script and outstanding model.Every charactor is vivid through the gripping plots.The most important thing is,the game has a chinese language support which is rare in this kind of games.Thx for bringing us such a marvelous game!Cant wait to see more updates in future.
By the way it is really a pity that this game cant launch on steam for both the artist and VALVE.
It really is 😔but thank you very much!
Only v0.5 and already, the writing is genius, the story is gripping, the characters are very likeable, and the visuals are pretty good.
I have a question tho, when 0.6 comes out, do I just install the APK, and the game would be updated while keeping my saves and settings?
Yep
I cant wait for the next version and this game is amazing
When is the release of next version?
Made an account just to tell you how great your game is! Story and character development is really well made! Love it, it really hooks you up. It reminds me of one of the litRPG novels, like Way of the Shaman or Disgardium, I wonder if you took inspiration from those!
Anyways awesome job! keep it up!
Thank you!
I'm just getting to the part with the dark hallway, and just gotta say: fucking SAME. Whenever Alex Kister uploads a new video for the Mandela Catalogue, something about the dark just seems way more unsettling than before lmfao
Caribdis You are a Genius man! I never play a visual novel like this. The history, characters and dialogues are perfect. I only crate an account to leave a comment 👍
Thanks!
nice game
The catagory of this game aside. this is THE BEST virtual novel type game I have ever played. An EXTREMELY solid 10/10 no doubt. You should really consider putting this game on steam.
Thank you!
Unfortunately I can't, so I rely on Patreon/Subscribestar!
You really should consider putting this beauty on Steam, especially with itch changing their payment options (or so I hear)
There are a TON of games on Steam which look like *expletive deleted*, and are only a fraction into as much development as Eternum... and another reason: I can buy Steam cards, so I don't need a credit card or paypal or whatever... I'd buy in a heartbeat... and maybe add the content for patreon in a DLC or something?
I can't put it on Steam because of licensing stuff, so I have to rely on Patreon and Subscribestar 😣
aww, total bummer, dude! :-(
Can I pay on either with a regular card? I don't have a card with those 3 validation numbers on the back
It should be possible, I think
That, or Paypal!
This is the most constructive comment section i’ve ever seen 💀 Makes me want to try the gam
as you should!
I've been checking back ever so often. I finally made an account to comment.
This is the best Virtual Novel I've played and seen. I'm a girl and I love it. Nova, Alex, and Luna are my favorite. I wish it had voice acting tbh. It'd be cool lol. Maybe in a future game.
Caribdis I just wanted to know when the next update will be. I hate cliff hangers and waiting for stuff, but this has gotten my interest so much. It's so well written! Do you write it yourself or do you have a team to help? I'm new to this site and I found you from a Youtuber that I randomly came accross, otherwise I wouldn't have known about this masterpiece. Also, I absolutely love that you comment on like everyone who comments on this, it's really nice to know that you're active in the community. :D
I had to create an account just to comment, I was tired of not being able to!
at the very very least 1 month, i imagine it will be more like 2 months though. and a little longer if youre not a patron
Yeah im not. I just wasn't sure how often the updates were lol. Thanks! I will check back in a month or 2.
Thank you, Zenia!
I write it myself yeah :D
And the next update should take a couple of months on Patreon probably!
Hi, I love your game, it's so addictive. I've been wondering, how long would it take for the whole game to be completed
It'll take a few years, there's lots of content to be done!
hey caribdis, u said there would be 4 scenes in the next update, im sure that includes dalia and alex... ive narrowed the next 2 scenes down to 3 people: penelope, nova, and annie. with a small chance that calypso gets something but i dont think she'll get any scenes for the entire game. im hoping that penelope gets a scene (i doubt it) but can u give me a hint :)? lol
edit: i guess it could actually be a side character. if it is, then its probably dalia, alex, annie, and a side character. i am really hoping penelope gets something tho :(
Won't reveal anything :]
i want to fuck calypso hard
I dont know if im allowed to post this here, but i got banned from the Caribdis discord server and i have no way of contacting a moderator. It said i got banned for a *unspecified reason*.
Thanks for your time
How to get the last one?
Completing the update, you have to call her in Wyatt's house
Really loving this game and the story. Looking forward to more.
Dear Developer,
I have finished the game, but I can't unlock the last outfit for annie. I have tried to reinstall the game but it's still the same problem. Anyone here have any thoughts on how to fix this?
Weird, did you see her kiss scene at the kitchen?
Yes. I tell her I like her and then I give her a kiss. After that, nothing happened. I have finished the game entirely and even try to play it over and over again but nothing happened.
That is a strange bug then, I'll look into it
Dear author, I have just solved the problem of overseas payment, and I am very happy to be your supporter. You have worked hard for the birth of 0.6. Thank you very much for your efforts. I am also looking forward to playing 0.6.
Thank you so much for supporting! 😍
Yeah you messed up her route..
You have to restart the playthrough. You probably messed up the same I did and complimented her hair or looks when you first meet her. Once you do that it's pretty much over for her route. You have to compliment her pen.
There's a text walkthrough available as an optional download that will guide you through the choices correctly if you want. It's obviously full of spoilers, so be warned
Extremely good. My only suggestion would be to maybe remove a specific character from the Eternum's VIP party scene. It kinda tipped the hat into the direction of game's overarching plot maybe sooner than you wanted it. Can't wait for the next update!
The game is just too good. But I want to ask that, in the future, the game will have updates, as it stil hasn't been completed right? So, how can I add the new features in the downloaded files?, I suppose that I will not need to redownload all over again whenever there's a new update?
It is and the next update is halfway done or more. Creator of this had a few road bumps recently but chugging along at the games development.
👍
You have to download it all again, yes, but you can continue your old saves
Hmm I see, thanks man 🙏 . But have you ever thought about the idea of creating update patches for each update, so that players wouldn't have to redownload for several times?
Hi! I've started playing Eternum, and I'm extremely impressed so far. As promised, I'll report typos I find in here, but honestly it took me forever to even come across the first one! Great job, there.
The one I found was the following line from Millie, where "its" should be "it's" with an apostrophe:
"There's a car in the parking lot that started smoking! It looks like its coming from the engine!"
Super minor, but there seems to be an extra space at the start of this line from Alex:
" Miss Bardot, congratulations! Would you like to share any words for those young athletes trying to achieve your levels of success?"
The same two lines further in, when she's again taking the role of the interviewer. Presumably because of the italics, but it still looks odd to me.
When Orion first lands in Ogygia, he's thinking to himself, and in this one line the question mark is outside the thinking parentheses:
"(Where am I)?"
An extra space before another italicized line:
" Ah, I see you have now begun guarding yourself. Your efforts are futile, however. I will just have to exert myself a little further…"
Thank you so much for the typos!! I fixed them all
You're welcome! There really are barely any, I'm very impressed :) I'll continue reporting them as I come across them.
Yo dev any planned pregnancy content in the future ?
Nova and Luna are the best! Love this game and cant wait for 0.6.
Those two are also my favorites! But this game has a lot of good characters.
Yooo, for real. But the other girls are nice too, especially Annie
does anyone know how to interact with the blue haired jester girl im tryna find her
if you have anything please lmk
hint: explore instead of wait
thanks
hey, have you thought about putting this and once in a lifetime on steam? Other great vn's like being a dik and leap of faith are on their, and your in the big 3 of AVN's in my opinion! I replay this game every few months i just love what you have created!
Unfortunately I can't because of licensing stuff, so I have to rely on Patreon and Subscribestar
Hello, where can I solve a problem that I have when trying to play since I played version 0.4 a long time ago and I loved it. And now I updated it and it won't let me play it, the game just freezes and then the computer freezes, if you could help me solve this problem I would really appreciate it since the game is perfect and I would like to see how it ends
Dear author, are you only active here? I saw that your twitter has not been updated for two months. Can I get your reply in patreon? Although I don’t want to disturb your creation, I can get you I will be very excited for your reply, my current economy can only be your supporter, but my salary will increase in a few months, and I hope I can support you more, because I really like this game, this It's the first time I want to sponsor an author
There is a problem with my overseas payment. It is the first time I use it. I will see how to solve it in the past two days.
I appreciate that a lot, thank you! <3
I'm active here, on Discord DMs, and especially on Patreon/SubscribeStar of course!
Real talk man, author to author here, (dare I call myself an author after experiencing this profoundly stunning WIP?!?! Or merely a peon who writes for fun?!) The way you set everything up is just perfect, the pacing, the dialogue, and the character reactions are just so on point. I cannot help but be in awe at your work. Originally I thought this was going to be some normal sex game, but after playing through it... My god... I cannot describe just how great it is, and sure people will complain about the mechanic of 'develop relations or say some funny one liner', but you have to hand it to Carabdis that they've made a masterpiece. And it isn't even finished yet! You have my respect, good sir, from one author to another.
(And you'll have my wages once I score a full time job, whether you like it or not! Because we need more of this, and God knows that if you ever stopped development because of insufficient funds then we'd all weep and a great abyss would open up across the Earth; denoting that a talented individual such as you was held back by the constraints of society and money!)
Enough dick sucking from me... Time to go and see what all the fuss is with OIAL.
With mad respect,
Genzu
Thank you Genzu!! <3
i come back and forth here to see if there are any news about 0.6, and i always read some comments and i heard you talking about discord, i wanted to join the server before but i heard it got raided and you deleted it or something? but i saw there is a new discord is it only for subsribers and people who support you on patreon?
The server is the same, you can still join and check the announcements as always, just the chatting and some channels are restricted to patrons rn to avoid more raids
Any news for 0.6 ?