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Best. Visual Novel. Ever.


Honestly this is a piece of art. I came for the girls, I stayed for the story.


Story (9/10) Only reason I'm giving this a 9/10 is the genre, I ended up skipping several of the erotic scenes because I wanted to get back to the story. It's better then any series, anime or movie I have seen in recent days, constantly kept me engaged and wondering what would happen next.


Erotic scenes (8/10) All of them were rather enticing, although a lot of them also felt mild. Can be easily solved by the time the story is finished, guess I simply wished a little more from my favorite girls. (The blue balling at the end of Nancy's first scene was gold btw)


Humor (9/10) Honestly the humor in this is one of it's selling points, perfect pacing, made me laugh out loud on so many occasions. Chang is the true MVP when it comes to humor, haven't had a scene with him in it where I didn't end up laughing.


Sound (8/10) Great use of music to create atmosphere. Only downside might be the music occasionally betraying when the next sex scene comes up, but even that has been used to subvert expectations. The stops for comedic value were implemented perfectly as well.

Overall:

An amazing visual novel to enjoy and you even get erotic scenes with the characters. Keeps you engaged with the story, great humor and I would (as the game does) recommend you to play it with sound.

Pro's:


Amazing story that keeps you wanting more


Great sex scenes, very emotional and intimate


Good humor, with great timing. No over exerting on it tho.


Cons:


Story too good, makes you skip sex scenes


Nova needs a proper sex scene


Not enough screen time for Chop Chop


Honestly, again, a piece of art, best of it's kind. I'm a supporter now because I will die if I don't get to see the end of this story.


Thanks for making this.

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Thank you for your review! Glad you liked it!

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The update was amazing 🙉 minor grammar issues in the new scenes but it was soooo funny and hot. The MC is super swoll ❤️ Im scared to see what happens next. Also the animation was sooo cuute for Calypso's tale. Excited for the next update ‼️

Thank you!

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Since the update, I have been having nothing but problems getting into the game. I keeps telling me that it's missing (I can't remember what exactly at the moment) but basically none of the pictures are showing up at the startup. I did what the thing said about copying the file and everything but it's not working right

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Debo decir que yo usualmente no leo las historias de estos tipos de juegos y salto directamente a la acción.. ya que casi siempre parece relleno y me terminan aburriendo por lo simple que son. Pero, Dios la historia y misterio de este juego es demasiado increible, así como el desarrollo de las relaciones basadas sobre la elección del jugador, son pocos los juegos que en verdad me he leído completamente sin llegar a saltarme nada, y este está entre esos. La única sugerencia que se me pudiera ocurrir es que sería genial si añadieran más escenas, sé que sigue aún en desarrollo, pero seria increíble ver mas escenas h con luna, nova o algún side character como lo es Eva. De la historia no tengo nada que decir, pues me está gustando mucho y no soy un guionista profesional, por lo que me quedaré a la expectativa.


Pd: Que increíble esa ultima escena de Alex, si añadieran mas de ese tipo con otros personajes no me quejaría XD

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Literal yo, Soy el "vine aqui por el porno y me quede por la historia"

I had a great time playing this game. The fact that it mentions Cambodia got me thinking if there were Cambodian contributors involved in its development. One standout aspect for me was the nuanced class themes and the clever infusion of humor throughout the gameplay.

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You get alot of well deserved praise, The setting is stellar, costumes/outfits are always hot and feel well chosen, Models while imperfect(I'll get into that) all do their job and look 10/10 in the perfect angles and still great in the less flattering ones.

The sex scenes(Especially the last one in 0.6) are incredibly well done writing wise and the animation is extremely serviceable for an indie CGI work.

The characters all do their job, either being likable, despisable, scary as shit or enigmatic, the mysteries never have me eye rolling, even when I knew reveals ahead of time, Using foreshadowing strong enough for us to understand but with context that explains why the MC would take awhile to figure them out was very smart and well done.

The girls are all super so lovable, and Alex has risen to the top of my list as of 0.6 & i'm sure is the case for others, beating out Annie & Luna in my case.

You only keep getting better, Now that i've used alot of your time with praise, I wanna shoot some slight critiques in hopes of making the game a bit better.

You got the poses & angles down, The animation will never be perfect so i'll skip that, but the models don't need that texture on their elbows and knees, it's in contrast to the rest of their young skin and the shape is already good, I doubt you need it, i'd feel it'd be better with it gone and just detracts from their visual appeal.

Further more the situations are all great, and im not saying this because I want the MC to be more escapist, he's great as is, likable & somewhat independent as a story telling tool but still relatable to be escapist, very well done, but I feel the dialogue can sometimes have strange prose, Maybe read some books? I don't mean that sarcastically either, like I said, situations, pacing etc are all great but once in awhile the word choice is strange/feels chosen out of a random box then things these people say.
Typically when people speak, they use the same preset sayings/words, it's consistent with "them" what they say. I'd try writing down their favorite sayings, how they moan specifically during X, favorite swears for anger vs banter etc. It'll just add to the already great foundation you have for them.

In my case instead of choosing from "shit,Fuck,Cunt,Dick etc." each person will have one they gravitate towards, when mad enough, some might haphazardly combine them together in anger as if throwing paint at a wall with their hands, some might prefer the word Cock vs Dick and visa versa, some might even call it penis(annie at first probably would.) but it typically doesn't wishwash once they've been in a situation enough, they choose what they say or how they like to convey something and consistently do so through those means unless given a reason not to, we're creatures of repitition but also adaption is what im saying, in dialogue it's the most noticable.

You don't do a bad job in that regard, just not always good either, and I think you could rise up cause I feel the love, You nail this in the comedy most of the time actually if not more so with their actions then dialogue so I have confidence.

Otherwise I feel improvement in everything, including the environments and outfits which were already massive draws for me, so I have no doubt you'll just keep getting better and using better resources/individuals.

Lastly, the girl's modesty doesn't seem too realistic at first, as it goes it would make sense they wanna attract the MC and the outfits are issued to the ones who would look best/be most likely to accept but it'd be hotter if they gradually wore skimpier clothes, Like how in the beggining og 0.6 Dalia chose the outfit she did however it would be awesome if the girls that're more attracted to you/outgoing & slutty chose sexier outfits, seing annie slowly become more revealing would be alot of fun, but that'd be something for a 3rd property if you ever wanted to add that as all the girls are already 4 <3 or more I believe and going back and doing over already great outfits just cause they don't perfectly fit the context or redoing the dialogue sounds like a nightmare. 

Sorry for taking up so much space here, love the game, you're doing great and I look forward to every update and every game you will make.

Take care & good luck.

Also, I see that the finesse/skill getting better in facial expressions, whether that's you or outside help its appreciated and will never be appropriately appreciated as it's so discreet but never stop, I think you understand as well if not better then me how important it is.

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Thank you so much for your feedback!

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all sexuality aside, this game has a very very great story. it's like sword art online remake

Chop-chop is fucking legend!

He's like the guy from fet

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lmao true

I'm wondering, if caribdis used him as reference.

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Homies >> Hoes

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Hey Caribdis, absolutely love the game you've made! I was wondering how do you make your environments? I'm currently trying to make my first game thanks to playing both your games and got inspired to try my own. Also do you mix softwares up? Like use daz, blender and hs2 or strictly hs2?

It's all done with hs2 :)

Thanks for the reply! Means alot the last scene was spectacular so pretty shocked it was all done in hs2. And the story is absolutely engaging. I honestly hope to create great games like you do. There are few artist out there that can create truly wonderful games like these! 

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CHANG BEFORE HOES

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Found this game on a porn games telegram channel, tought why is the name "Eternum"? And DAMN this is already good and im only on the space oddesy mission, so like only the star and damn im coming for the plot atp, i wanna know how it ends so I'll come back here when finish the game and write my opinio again, se yall and thanks again for this game

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how do I download this on the iPhone14?

This game is one of the biggest yet most welcoming surprises ever. Never expected to actually be so hooked on the story and the characters and replaying it just to see more. Cant wait for the next update.

Thank you for playing!

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嗨,我非常喜欢这个游戏。但我有一个问题,我很好奇0.6最后那个人说主角傻,什么都不懂是什么意思?主角不是已经意识到,永恒里的NPC可能就是真正的人类吗?那他为什么说男主傻呢?0.5的结局我感觉有些深思熟虑,也很后怕,但是0.6的结局相比0.5就有点尴尬了。当然,除非这个人真的知道玩家和主角都不知道或猜不到的东西。不然0.6的结局真的很傻

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please answer me.I don't have PayPal so I can't buy the game or I would definitely spend a lot of money to support this game.

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If you wish to support the development, you can use Payoneer (caribdis.p@gmail.com), my Patreon and SubscribeStar pages, a donation in itch.io itself, or even Bitcoin (bc1qyf08awu70pclsalj5uka3q6r4lxwjnea46a07p)

All support is appreciated, thanks in any case!

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In fact, when I first came into contact with Eternity, I didn’t even know about PayPal. After that I opened the vpn and downloaded PayPal. But I can't register. I don't have a bank card yet, and PayPal may not be widely used in my country. The first time I played it was a pirated version on telegram. Later I thought of buying the genuine version, but ended up not being able to buy it. . . . . I don’t know how to fill in the zip code on the PayPal registration page, and I don’t have a bank card yet so I can’t pay. I can't understand a lot of English. Good luck to you then. I will definitely buy eternity for you as soon as I find PayPal or other payment methods that can be used in my country.

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Since I don't know much English, I used Google Translate. I may have said something wrong in some places. I'm sorry if this bothers you.

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I was living a bad life, and in a very bad and depressed moment, I discovered the Eternum. And after playing it, I really did. . It was very uncomfortable because I was so happy. I was hopeless in life, but at the lowest point I found a ray of light that I cherished the most. Ridiculous. It's really ridiculous that this beam of light is a porn game. But it doesn't matter to me because it's a porn game, I love this game. Really love it. I'm really sad and tired. Maybe I've known about losing a long time ago, but if I really lose, why should I be given these things? Can't you just let me die?

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Hey buddy, you okay? Maybe it's just random rant on internet, but if not and you are in a dark place and you have nobody else to talk to, I will listen/we can talk.

Thank you for your concern, my friend. I just have no hope in life, but I like this game very much. I feel terrible. I'm not good at expressing myself. Thank you very much for your reply.Thank you

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Incase you would like to talk, hit me up norxar@gmail.com as I am not sure if Itch.io has private messages :)

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don't stress yourself much and on this game being a porn game its not ocward or anything you can get morals and a new way to see life in everything you just have to look into everything you do

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I'm just useless. Then when I first came into contact with this type of game, I thought many of them were just for sex and ignored the plot. But when I played Eternity I discovered I was wrong. Eternity is really great. It's the first time I've played such a large-scale visual game, and it's such a top-notch game. I don't know if I can play anything else. And why I have such a big feeling is because I didn't expect this game to be so good. The sense of gap made me feel that I was living a strange life. And then I am very different. Just sad. I don't care because it's a porn game. Because I always feel that this game is a light in my heart. Even if it's a porn game.

it is more than a porn game, it is like a book, in fact. like harry potter with spicy scenes. Dont see it as a porn game with good story, see it as a good story with some porn! And btw ur everything else than useless, im sure of it!

yes th mc know about the characters in eturnum being a real people what that person means the the mc doesnt know what eturnum really is as a whole . is it really a game or what is really it ? 

I hope you understand what I said  

Looking forward to eternal follow-up development

It took me a week to binge this game, I loved the story and the characters so much. I then went back and binged Once in a Lifetime in even less time, I was concerned it wouldn't be as good as it was older but found myself just as gripped and in love with all the characters. Easily the best stories I've played in games in a long time, eagerly waiting for more. Amazing pair of games.

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Thank you so much!

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I'm having trouble with the download file it's not downloading the game so I'm currently downloading the zip file as I write this

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Why does the story have me so hooked? I love the impact of your choices even if they are not readily apparent. Looking forward to the next update.

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Glad you liked it!

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Character crossovers are lit🔥

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I never really care or bother to comment but damn I'm having withdrawals, I'm left on the edge..I neeed to know what happens next!!  (T O T)

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Thank you for playing!

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Ignore Joshthedemon or, Just the dumbass as I call them. All they do is pull whinny lil illiterate hissy fits and call people “fat fucks” “fat boy” and berate fans and Devs on multiple threads, tell people to fuck their dad or get raped by their dad’s friends as well as threaten your family… sounds like projection to me, but it’s all there in their comment history for you all to see and report so I clown tf outta them and report it all as well as let each thread they fucked around on find out exactly what they are like. Fuck around find out, dumbass

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You should do too..your comments are everywhere, are you his twin?

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Looks like someone didn’t actually read past them to find out why and just assumed or you’d know why I commented everywhere they did… calling them out, hence posting everywhere they did

not your problem tho, anyway try to report him

They basically threatened my family so I’m hitting them every way, eventually with enough reports they’ll get banned (same with any alts) and eventually move on to harass the sun for shining in their eyes or something

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I did not expect horror. I was not disappointed by the horror.
I did not expect comedy. I was not disappointed by the comedy.

both were very nice and very enjoyable. I can tell the people making this are having a lot of fun making it and that's more important to me than any of the content(which was also nice). Thank you for making a nice game.

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Thank you for playing!

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one question. why the fuck when i try to download it from mega i run into non stop errors and i cant even start it because of more errors when i finally get it downloaded?

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Because MEGA... if you use the google drive link it'll probably download without any issues.

Nah I use mega I don't have any problem. I downloaded hundreds of files there

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i dislike mega because there's a limit to how much stuff you can download then you have to wait awhile.

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speaking of having a limit. how's your convos with 6paladin going? I mean the one who doesn't even know what paladins do and the one who just sits at home commenting on basically the same game borderline stalking the creators.

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Not here bro, you two are ruining the comment sec

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i didnt do shit with the convo sec he started it and you literaly said nothing to him about stopping. its fucked up how people never say shit to the person causing the problem.

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and heck you could even delete the messages were sending.

because ur a scrub?

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the mc is ugly as shit make him look better ong

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I bet you're uglier tho

just wait for his glow up

I just finished the 0.5 version and I want to play the 0.6 but without to play at beginning. How I can do this? 

Also this game is perfect, got me in story and is 1000/10

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PC: Just download and run the new version, your saves should be there. Android: Update/install the new version with the old version still installed, that should preserve your saves. Keep in mind that the high-res version has special install instructions.
There have been reports that saves from 0.5 don't always work on 0.6. If that happens to you, look at the comments below for suggestions what you can do.

Well sadly now my save doesn't load and appear an error, maybe I will wait some time when the game has more story and I will play it again 

Hello Caribdis,

      This game is truly a masterpiece! I must say Eternum is a great work of art and thought-provoking philosophical story. I want to tell you something that I had a dream recently, in it I met with Neo. He wanted to ask you a favor: please don’t let Zireael die, or it will break his heart and the Oracle’s……and of course Gwynnbleid’s heart. Truly the Architect is very powerful, but he was confident that the royal lineage of elder blood could defeat him and White Frost. Please give Zireael one happy ending at least.

      At last, I wanna say good luck to you all. And remember there are thousands of Aen Seidhe across the great sea who are amazed by your great achievement. Though many of us may not have portals to reach you, we will still support you till Tedd Deireadh and beyond.

      Ps. I bet 100 bucks with Avallac'h that you are a player of StarCraft II, especially the Wings of Liberty. Can you confirm that I win it?

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You'd lost that bet, unfortunately haha

I've never played it, sorry! 😆

How sad......TOT. That's fine, I think he will donate that 100 bucks to your Patreon anyway.

By the way, I've written a 39 pages essay to discuss the Easter eggs related to the witcher 3, the Matirx and the Ready Player One and many other hidden hints such as Anima, Psyche , Convergence, eternal recurrence, elder blood etc. and I can still find more!! I really hope you could turn Eternum into a science fiction someday, it must be a true masterpiece. (the game already is!)

Love you guys!

Oh wow, that would be very appreciated! Thank you so much guys <3

I've played and have played a good amount of these types of games, by a bunch of different devs and teams and I can honestly say this is ome of my favorites by far. The story, the characters, the music, the art, the dialogue, etc. It's all amazing and I can't wait to see more Cari's work!!!!

Thank you very much!

I download this game my cus my brain said fuck it, I really want to wait before this game is completed before playing, cus cari is the fastest VN creator. Anyway I will give my feedback when I finish the latest ver.

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This game has really great music and soundtracks, i love it!! Who was the composer for the piano music on the title screen? Also for the in game music?

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i played this game acouple months ago do i just havw to download it again to update it?

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Yes you would have to download it again

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this game is extremely well made, but it's only missing one thing. anal. and i think others might agree with me. 

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Your relationships get more intimate/kinky as the story progresses. I'm sure you'll get what you're looking for in a later update.

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Correct!

Can the lovely community help me?

I've downloaded the full res for Android, it kept crashing at first despite following the steps correctly. However, I fixed it by naming the folder in Ixalon "game" to "game directory". It loads fine but it's just black saying at the top left "splash", "splash2" image not found. All that loads are the text and after a while "main_menu" not found is stated on the top left. 

Is there any way to fix this? If not I'll just download the other one

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i don't think there is a way to fix this i think you should re-download the file and extract it there you will find "read me" file follow it and it will work i did that

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Very good game

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Hi there, just a fan saying thanks again for your amazing work and wondering if you already started working on the next update. Enjoy it and keep the good work ;)

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Yep, I'm working on it!

Getting some errors about missing files on Android can't get to the loading screen at the beginning without it saying it couldn't find something

Nevermind followed wrong instructions

how to transfer the saves to updated game (Also Nova best girl)(nevermind its chang)

Can anyone help me cuz after i download 0.6 on my phone i cant install it, when i try to install it, it just says app not installed

Not enough space on the phone (its my guess)

did you extract the file properly there is instructions you should follow

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Loved your previous game but this blows it out of the water, once again you managed to make a whole cast of amazing women to pursue. Shame the ole stabbster isn't the active president in this game or doesn't make a surprise appearance in some form. Guy made me laugh, chop-chop seems to be this games weirdo that likes to follow the MC around. 😂

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there are some Reference too him n u find out what school he went too

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Oh so there are more references to him near the the end of .60? Only reference I caught was the initial one in the beginning looll

So, yeah, finished it. no way im going through it again to *try* open different routes, but what i got so far was preety damn good. ( i see in screens on the side you can do the redhair, no clue how tho)

Anyway, Mr, i think you shot yourself in the foot right here, now you gotta write Eternum itself.

you have to follow her route so you'll have to replay it, there is a walkthrough if you dont want to waste time that gives you all of them in one run.

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how do i report this game

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how do i report to your parents you grew up being a disappointment? oh wait they already know that nvm

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Skittle, you must be a Donald trump supporter huh?

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no

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